As with any English essay, it is key that we respond to the prompt with a coherent, well-structured, grammatically-sound response. As such, the first step to writing this essay is to form a simple outline in our heads (or down on paper, as is your preference).
與任何英文作文一樣,答題時,關鍵在於以一個連貫、結構良好、語法正確的回答來表達。因此,寫這篇作文的第一步就是在我們的腦海中形成一個簡單的大綱(或者根據你的喜好寫在紙上)。
📝 寫作對策
譯 首先要做的是建構你的論點,這將以一個主旨句的形式呈現。在這篇作文中,主旨句也可以作為你的前言。由於題目沒有要求對這個主題有特定的偏見,我們可以選擇支持或反對提供的陳述。我們還可以就這個問題進行有意義的討論或對話,但要確保你直接且完整地回答題目。在這個題目中,請確保你的答案中使用到「ChatGPT」、「save lives in the emergency room」和「supervision」這些字詞。以下是範例引言:
【引言】 ChatGPT, under careful and trained supervision, can help save lives in the emergency room. It is important that we equip medical professionals with the knowledge and tools to aid this process.
譯 接下來,在開始寫作文之前,先在腦海中形成一個簡單的大綱。在我的腦海中,我將想像的方向如下:
_ nature of advancing medicine 醫學進步的本質
_ accurate prompting 精確的指引
_ increase hospital efficiency 增進醫院效率
_ thorough supervision 嚴格監督:全面監管
_ urgency and precision 迫切性與精準度
_ professional duty 專業責任
By visualizing and isolating main keywords into an outline, we begin to form a logical dialogue in our mind. We also force ourselves to think within the capacity of these words and not of any other distractions. The only thing left to do is to form a sentence or two for each point in our outline. Let’s begin:
譯 透過將主要關鍵詞具體化並將其分解成大綱,我們開始在腦海中形成一個邏輯對話。我們也迫使自己在這些詞語的範圍內思考,而不受其他干擾。現在只需要為大綱中的每個要點形成一兩個句子即可。讓我們開始:
【段落一】 Modern medicine is shaped by successive waves of innovation and technological progress. Such is the nature of the medical field, in which authorities must constantly improve conventional practices for the benefit of their patients. The evolution of medicine equips doctors and their staff with better tools to save peoples lives. The effects of using ChatGPT in its current form are determined by the precision of its prompts. Proper prompting of ChatGPT allows artificial intelligence to respond in the most suitable manner that provides more effective results. In the case of medicine, accurate prompting may prove the difference between accurate diagnoses and patients deaths. As such, in order to allow ChatGPT to work alongside medical staff most aptly, technical specialists must be consulted to ensure appropriate results. Once applicably formatted, ChatGPT could offer radical improvements to the emergency room, increasing general efficiency by explaining complex procedures, minimizing wait times, streamlining hospital systems, and facilitating general tasks.
譯 在你的寫作中,請務必使用轉折詞、介系詞片語和各種形容詞來凸顯重點。不同的句子結構可以讓讀者保持專注和興趣。請避免在作文中冗長解釋細節,這會使你偏離題目。一個好的用字提示是:「如果你對詞語的用法不確定,就不要使用它。」
【段落二】 Thoroughly comprehensive supervision of ChatGPT and all of its functions is of the highest importance. Under the precarious circumstances of the emergency room, where life-threatening decisions are judged with an extreme sense of urgency and precision, it is vital that authorities instruct ChatGPT to provide an ideal level of support. Medical professionals should remain the ultimate authority in such vital circumstances; an over-reliance on supplementary technologies will not only damage the self-sufficiency of doctors, but also encroach on the professional duty of medical staff as a whole. So it is important that we do not let the benefits of such a revolutionary technology blind us of underlying risks.
【結論】 In conclusion, ChatGPT may greatly reinforce efforts to save lives in the emergency room, but considerable, conscientious supervision must be maintained in order to ensure the greatest good.
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譯 這篇範文只是一種可能呈現型態,你也可以寫出一篇反對ChatGPT進入急診室的作文。因為這個題目相當開放,讓我們可以自由選擇如何回應這個議題,而不強迫採取特定的觀點。然而,請盡量不要過於激動或情緒化,尤其是對於敏感的話題,這可能導致你的作文離題或失去焦點。最重要的要點是:
★ Have a clear, concise, well-defined argument 提出一個明確、簡潔、明確定義的論點 ★ Follow your keywords and stay on track 遵循關鍵詞,保持主題一致 ★ Use vocabulary that you know well 使用你熟悉的詞彙 ★ Answer the prompt fully 完整回答題目 ★ Make sure to complete your essay with a concluding paragraph 總結你的作文
Final things to consider when writing essays in a test like this are word count, time restraints, and number of body paragraphs. Knowing from practice that I generally write essays of around three hundred words in twenty minutes, I will design my essay outline to have only two body paragraphs, because I want to use around one hundred and fifty words per paragraph, which will be around six to eight sentences each.
譯 在像這樣的考試中寫作時,還有一些需要考慮的事項,如字數限制、時間限制和全篇段落數量。通過平常練習得知,我通常在二十分鐘內寫三百字左右的文章,所以我設計作文大綱只有兩個主體段落,每個段落約有一百五十個詞左右,大約六到八個句子。
Knowing how quickly I plan my outline and write my essay will give me a better idea of how I can structure my paragraphs when I take the test in person. As such, Ill encourage you to write a few timed practice essays at home to get a general grasp on how well you will do in a test.
譯 了解自己計劃的大綱和寫作速度,當親自參加考試時可以更好地規劃段落結構。因此,我鼓勵你在家寫幾篇定時的練習作文,可以更了解在考試中的表現。
One last piece of advice I will offer is to stay on top of current events and controversial issues. Test questions are becoming increasingly relevant to events in our daily lives, and it is important to read lightly about several topics from different subjects so that you have a general understanding of the world around you. Itll also act as a necessary break during your study sessions.
譯 最後,我要提供一個建議:關注時事和有爭議的問題。考試題目越來越與我們日常生活中的事件相關,重要的是要輕鬆閱讀議題中的不同主題,這樣您才能對周圍的世界有一個大致的了解。 它還將作為您學習期間的必要休息時間。
Good luck with your writing!
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Victor Wan 寫作 ChatGPT